tourism
In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss your opinion and give example.
The importance of tourism for a country, which has been always debated, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of undeveloped country, has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on country’s tourism development in recent years. It can be agreed that develop countries has more tourism advantages than others. This essay will elaborate both develop and undeveloped countries tourism, and then lead to conclusion.
Firstly, there are numerous reason why underdeveloped countries has disadvantages of tourism, but most important fact is that tourist don’t prefer to visit those countries. There are particular reasons such as lack of security, pollution, and facilities. For instance, Pakistan, and Afghanistan are mainly underdeveloped countries which are facing terrorism, many health issues and etc. Thus, development has dramatic effects on countries tourism business. There are some countries who makes 30% of their income from just tourism.
On the contrary, the people from those countries think that they are getting enough tourist even their countries are underdeveloped. They might be right but tourist only come from underdeveloped country. An illustration, Afghanistan people go to Pakistan for holidays and vice versa. As research shown that there are very less number of tourist come in a year to Pakistan than India and Nepal. So, underdeveloped countries get benefits from tourist business but not as much as developed.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that underdeveloped countries have less tourist and they won’t be able to get more advantages from tourist.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: has always been
...ortance of tourism for a country, which has been always debated, has now become more controvers...
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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...re facing terrorism, many health issues and etc. Thus, development has dramatic effects ...
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Suggestion:
...le to get more advantages from tourist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, then, thus, well, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65313653137 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13588879895 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.567785112 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1176470588 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242622379819 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10288974551 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111525867933 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154179411869 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132983086551 0.0609392437508 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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