Is tourism in less developed countries advantage or disadvantage? Discuss your views and give your opinion.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about tourism's influences on nation's economy for less developed countries. While it is possible to claim that nation with high tour and tourism play a preponderant role to raise revenue and economy. My view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall discuss my personal view by analyzing the both sides of argument.
There are several reasons why tourism cultivate the wealth in any nations. On of them is employment as there are opportunities to increase for locals with increase of tourists. It can also be argued that tourists get knowledge or flavor of local tradition and exaggerate the nation which ultimately effect nation's image. For example festivals and events during year. It should be also taken into account that tourists come to nation means purchase product of places, cause the increase in revenue of dwarf as well nation.
Those who argue that tourism in less developed countries have their a negative view and say that it is accurately a good thing. Firstly it is claimed that tourists may create problems like racism with local residents which may result into dispute. Then, there are many concerns about safety of tourists while travelling to nation.
While there are strong arguments of both views in this case, my personal view is that tourism has pivotal direct impact on nation's economy and affect it's image at international level. I would recommend that every nation eases the tour visa norms and policies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, so, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05577689243 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53873970358 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609561752988 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7034616502 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6428571429 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143763532529 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521813409401 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646843073906 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950268201331 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588159287108 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 59.0 Out of 90
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