In town and cities, large shopping mall should replace the small local shops. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trend’s today is world that large shopping mall should replace in the large shop in the market. There is widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of problems buyers and sellers. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
To begin with, there are numerous arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that It is easy to approach a small shop for shopping. Not only these shops reduce wastage of time for shopping, but also helps in earning for a number of sole traders, which is not possible in large shopping centers. Needless to say, all these merits stand small shops in good stead, as far as wastage of time and employment of people is concerned.
To the other hand, another pivotal aspect of this argument is that small shops are cost effective. Beside, due to very small expenses on the sale of products, it ultimately reduces the product price. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of the small shops.
To sum up, as aforementioned, in view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of small shops are indeed too great to ignore. Small shops is very helpful in people because it is located in society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72018348624 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61186473375 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1043221389 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232243929742 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806198372718 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733199855355 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1359662654 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264076889525 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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