Cashless society is becoming a reality. More and more people are using credit cards for payment, and lesspeople use cash. How realistic do you think it is and what do you see in its potential benefits or problems?

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Cashless society is becoming a reality. More and more people are using credit cards for payment, and less
people use cash. How realistic do you think it is and what do you see in its potential benefits or problems?

With the advancement of technology, many people are know about this modern era. Furthermore, technology play a crucial role in everyone’s life by building personality. It is incredible issue that credit card payment is very helpful to people in many ways and i will discuss both advantages or disadvantages in the overcome next paragraph.
To begin with, there are a myriad advantages of using credit card in our society. In addition, cardless payment is save a lot of time of the people if a person want pay the electricity and mobile bill with the help of credit card at home then credit also help in people due to more money on bill payment. Moreover, people can save lot of money in credit card and they are using credit card money in everywhere and every place and the size of credit card is too small it is easily kept in the pocket.
On the other hand. Some people are not know about the technology and they are lacking a problem of how to use credit. In addition , any time some people are need to a cash but credit card can not provide of cash money. For instance, some shops are not accept the card payment but there people are facing lack of problem.
In conclusion, I keep pen down saying credit card payment is very helpful in people and every people follow the cardless payment in our society because if a person have a credit card then it would not need a lot of money in the form cash in their pocket

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46360153257 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45077700076 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2168394906 50.4703680194 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.909090909 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254729036314 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104946109605 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631656968257 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163219081198 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586176411209 0.0609392437508 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.5310837438 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 55.0591133005 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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