A matter of considerable controversy at a present is the issue of weather large shopping mall replacing the small local shop. Both side of contentious issue will be put under scrutiny in the essay below and my opinion as to which holds more weight will be given. This essay will elaborate how shopping mall save our time also kills local economy. However, I do not entirely agree and I will explain why in it.
To begin with, variety of advantages can be put forward for malls. Daily needs all accessories are available in under one roof like, cloths, groceries, dairy products, movies etc. It is time saving. International branded items are available at discounted price. Now day’s there is huge competition between these malls to attract the consumer to them they are reducing prices of products also giving the lot of discount. This is a great opportunities for user and they taking benefits of all these offers.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly impact on large malls replacing small local shops. One of them is it murder the local economy. What is more, another points against the same is lot of people will be jobless and it is direct impact on their family. Hence, it is apparent why so many in favor of large shopping malls replacing small local shops.
In conclusion, weighting all the arguments up each other, there are strong and valid points on both sides of the fence and balance should be sought. We can replace the small local shop with large shopping malls by taking care of local economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 441, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'opportunity'?
Suggestion: opportunity
...ng the lot of discount. This is a great opportunities for user and they taking benefits of al...
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Line 4, column 510, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey taking benefits of all these offers. Nevertheless, there remain some drawback...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, nevertheless, so, as to, in conclusion, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83802816901 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49093775089 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2346533653 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473751580446 0.242375264174 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155020863752 0.0925447433944 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196991013568 0.071462118173 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354679970259 0.151781067708 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.294539008521 0.0609392437508 483% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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