In towns and cities, large shopping malls should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is the colossal upsurge in concerns that shopping malls should replace small shops. There is a widespread worry that could be a problem for both the buyers and sellers. In my opinion, the apprehension is warranted and merits some serious consideration.
There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is the small shop could be a time saver. Not only one has to wander the shopping mall to find the required item, but also it could lead to wastage of their precious time. For example, if you want to buy a pen in a mall you might have to get to a dedicated section which would need you to walk far; however, you can drive to local shops to buy the same item. Needless to say, all merits stand small shops in good stead, as far as time-saving is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that buying from small shops could save money. The rent for a locally owned commercial property is less when compared to malls, and this would, in turn, reduce the product price. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of small shops
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of small shops are indeed too great to ignore.
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- In towns and cities, large shopping malls should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree? 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...e serious consideration. There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50877192982 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38835020088 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.300381961 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4545454545 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310123253703 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105428881129 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828394914395 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173460524354 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514314365316 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.5310837438 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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