In towns and cities, large shopping malls should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is the colossal upsurge in concern that shopping malls should replace small shops. There is a widespread worry that could be a problem for both the buyers and sellers. In my opinion, the apprehension is warranted and merits some serious consideration.
Firstly, there are myriads of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that small shop could be a time saver, and easy to access. Not only one has to wander around the shopping mall to find the required item, but also it could lead to wastage of their precious time. For example, if you want to buy a pen in a mall you might have to get to a dedicated section which would require you to walk far; however, you can drive to local shops to buy the same item. Needless to say, all merits stand small shops in good stead, as far as time-saving and time management are being considered.
Secondly, another pivotal aspect of this argument is that buying from small shops could save money. The rent for a locally owned commercial property is less when compared to malls, and this would, in turn, reduce the product price. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of small shops.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of small shops are indeed too great to ignore.
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- In towns and cities, large shopping malls should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree? 72
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60084033613 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41049435111 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596638655462 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5632261691 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283132131276 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09176382505 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760679924009 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15655996627 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493658336656 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.1260098522 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.9458128079 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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