Today, tourism becomes a very big industry worldwide. Some countries' economy depends heavily on tourism like Singapore 60 percent GDP income generated through tourism only. But under developed countries are not much tourist friendly and tourism over there has many disadvantages as well as some advantages. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss in detail.
First of all, let's discuss why under developed countries has disadvantages in tourism. First thing in these countries tourists face is related to their safety as crim rate in these countries are very high especially againt tourist. Next, no proper public facilities are avaiable for tourists in these countries. As these countries do not have resources to conserve their tourist spots properly. For example, some Afarican countries have some tourist spots recognised by world heritage society but due to lack of support by governmnet these are not attracting so many tourists.
On the other hand, tourist also get some advantages in under developed countries like, tourist spots are cheaper then developed countries. In these countries tourist spots are not much crowded and tourist can enjoy the spot fully. These spots are easily accessible and affordable.
To conclude, in under developed countries, tourism has disadvantages as well as advantages as discussed in the above essay in detail.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then, well, for example, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48341232227 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76341928643 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559241706161 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4984832306 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125398105493 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626127094885 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685275028489 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118631674779 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831237427049 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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