University experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on this topic can lead to though-provoking arguments. My view is that, irrespective of numerous arguments that exist on either side, I disagree with this statement; as I believe that educational degree is considerably more important than university life in both job market and our lives.
There are a number of reasons to support my stance. First of all, the educational degree is considered to be the only evidence to ensure one's qualifications. Regardless of how exciting those years of university study were, the achieved grade is the tangible measure of your competency. Therefore, I believe that one must exhibit more effort working on his degree.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that, usually, people are done with their university studies on young age, leaving a plenty of time for them to create relationships and enjoy the aspect of their youth lives, while it is not the same cause for the educational degree itself which consumes enormous amount of money and time to be passed in a satisfactory way. Thus, I think working on our degrees would be the sagacious decision to be made.
In conclusion, the above-aforementioned arguments justify why the educational degree is markedly more effective and important for our life than to enjoy the university experience itself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...dered to be the only evidence to ensure ones qualifications. Regardless of how excit...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a satisfactory way" with adverb for "satisfactory"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s amount of money and time to be passed in a satisfactory way. Thus, I think working on our degrees w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24778761062 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1521945014 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62389380531 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.9772307186 50.4703680194 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.777777778 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273685481438 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998784718749 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110588849905 0.071462118173 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176633826482 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917872754932 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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