Recently, we have witnessed enormous growth in travel for education at foreign locations. This trend has sparked a new debate among proponents and experts. Many are in favour of travel for academic purpose, however, others have opposite views stating that it is merely hype and not necessary and scholar studied at domestic institutions have more knowledge. In this article, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages before deriving an appropriate conclusion.
To begin with, due to lack of schools, colleges and universities at home, students are forced to travel for pursuing their dream careers. Moreover, traveling at a tender age will bring significant benefits and equip academia with rich experience in terms of remote societies and their cultures. For instances, for earning my degree in the field of information system and technology, I was having no options but to travel as there were no faculty for computer engineering in my state. Furthermore, due to travel, I don't only have earned a prestigious degree but also have earned and embraced mammoth knowledge.
On the other hand, due to its higher cost, not all sections of the society are able to travel. Many of excellent scholars have been emerged by studying domestically by facing severe adversities. For example, Gandhi from India and Mundella from South Africa are two world-famous thinkers and leaders, who have achieved greater success by getting educated locally.
In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that although there are certain paramount benefits of traveling for study, many intelligent people have emerged from their local land due to their persistence efforts and hard work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'hyped'.
Suggestion: hyped
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34456928839 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82260370884 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659176029963 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2138191975 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317771494023 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117112911897 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784085028463 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185727883868 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754557371924 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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