Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about violence which is shown on media. While some progressively adore the ideology that causes crime scenes shown in these movies increase in crime rate in society, others undoubtedly despise it. This essay will prudently persuade both views and will conclude that such shows cause increase in crime in society.
People particularly young children who watch movies having crime scene normally get inspired by them. They want to try themselves for such thrill. They don't have such a strong mind to think these things critically. As a result they start criminal activities and crime rate increase in society. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed a research which shows that 20% of criminal people were those who started committing crimes after watching violence movies in their childhood.
Those who argue that such scenes do not affect people, actually ignore the fact that majority of viewers are young children who get aspiration from the fame portrayed in such movies. A research which was undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that in USA, crime rate is increased because of Hollywood crime scenes movies. So we can say that crime scenes have negative effects on society.
To conclude, although there are several compelling arguments on both sides of the case but by critical analysis I am agree that violence which is portrayed in movies and TV shows makes people criminal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...to try themselves for such thrill. They dont have such a strong mind to think these ...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... the case but by critical analysis I am agree that violence which is portrayed in mov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 5.94088669951 286% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13991769547 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56055718843 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600823045267 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4276304944 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.083333333 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 2.75862068966 399% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289948139089 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10146281307 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612572640549 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174811062184 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287560909633 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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