In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory. Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting? !f voting is compulsory in a democratic society, what are some conclusions we can draw about the nature of democracy?
These days, there is continuous debate of either voting must be compulsory in democratic system or not. While some people argue strongly in favor of compulsory voting, others simply despise it. In this essay, I will discuss importance of voting and its overall advantages in society.
Democracy is the way in which people select their representative for making government. In this way every person should vote so that his favorite candidate can win. If some educated people don’t vote then there are chances that good people will not be selected thus putting question mark on whole system. As per last year report of Pakistan Election Commission in recent election voters turn out was only 55% which is too low. This turn out can only increased if voting is compulsory by law. So I strongly agree that voting must be compulsory.
If voting is compulsory in a society then we can conclude that people are taking interest in democratic system. In this phenomenon democracy will represent contribution of maximum people in this system. Elected people will also feel more accountable as they have to answer large public. This will increase overall confidence of general public in government system. For example, there are many countries in the world where there is democratic system since long and these countries are developed with more speed than others where democracy is not so strong.
In conclusion, democracy is best way of government and voting must be compulsory in this system which will increase overall efficiency of the system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11462450593 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6459432122 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549407114625 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1867399267 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2666666667 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270274902777 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104172970813 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773854808304 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181361161853 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040554391152 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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