Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in crime scenes in the movies. There is a wide spread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concern in the society. In My opinion violence portrayed on the TV and movies has more negative impact than positive in the society.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefit of such scenes is the entertainment of the audience. For an example, unlike past due to the lack of advanced technological support, now movies and programs have more fighting scenes and the success rate of such programs or movies are much higher than those without it.
On the other hand, there are several arguments in favor of my stance. One of the most preponderant one is that such crime scene has negative consequence for the teenagers in various ways. According to a survey in New York city schools, the juvenile cases has increased 120% than before, and along with that the common reason that was found is, all the adolescents were motivated due to such crime scenes on TV or Movies. Secondly, the eye-catchy crime scenes has negatively affected the social life as the cases of the racism and domestic violence has also increase with a common reason behind it, is the such programs on TV.
Lastly, in my opinion the government and the entertainment industries must take great initiative to prevent the likely hood that people tends to become criminal after watching such programs to have peaceful society.
In the view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that despite having benefit, the drawback are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80633802817 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51841807043 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0823575721 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.090909091 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192739162051 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703589743927 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733950170513 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100684960408 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673569864943 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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