Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree.
Violence is one of the ways in which repressed emotions may emerge. Society at large, acts as a form of social control against small instances of violent behaviour and at higher levels of pathological violence, we have the law and the mental health authorities that can intervene to put an end to this menace. I do not believe that watching movies, and crime related shows on television can impact any individual so deeply that he or she starts resorting to violence.
While there can be several motives for violent acts including anger, vengeance jealousy, mental illness or bigoted religious beliefs, we can certainly ascribe some of these to the way society functions rather than to the consumption of media.
The prime reason for the rise in violent crime, according to me, is the disintegration of the family system, and the rise of small independent households along with personal autonomy. All this has been accompanied by a reduction in the amount of social control over our actions. We are no longer as accountable to our friends, family, or colleagues, as in the past. The nature of our fast-paced personal lives is such that we may not be aware of what our next-door neighbour is up to.
The economics behind the agenda of politically motivated and religiously motivated violence is further testament to the fact that TV shows and movies cannot really instigate violence, as strongly as the lure of money.
Another point to consider is the fact that we constantly being bombarded with new movies and shows, therefore, we are quite numb to the violence depicted on our screens as we are accustomed to it now. Therefore, as global citizens of the 21st century we are less likely to engage in violent behaviour.
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- Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree. 80
- Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree. 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, really, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93150684932 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76695374498 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9692005611 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.909090909 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136444585206 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482401529879 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232975545767 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698148277586 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291065917086 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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