What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.?
What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.?
These days it is most conspicuous that there is a colossal upsurge in people staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day. Some interpret that this is thoroughly constructive while other have an opponent view. The agenda of this article is to refine both sides of the argument which clarify how it impacts the person and society and leads to a legitimate conclusion,
From a general stand point, the advantages of being online 24 hours are that the person can be reached anytime through one of the application that he is online. Moreover, it will also help to enhance the person's political knowledge, social awareness on what is happening around the world etc., As a tangible example, I am a person, who is always online where I read blogs and that helps to enrich my general knowledge. A longitudinal research was done by scientists recently has demonstrated that on an average there are 100 billion people globally who are always on online.
On the flip side, there are few disadvantages where being online affects the eyesight and rarely blocks the thinking capability. It also makes people very lazy, especially with the young people where they don`t do any exercise leading to health issues. For instance, people who are always on the internet will be using their mobile phones or other gadgets where their bodies will not co-operate to do exercise. As they are forced to sit in one place, they become inactive people and a recent study had revealed that being inactive is much more harmful than cigarette smoking.
To recapitulate, hashing out all the aforementioned deliberation, I profoundly believe that advantages outweigh the disadvantages to the people who are always online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 5.94088669951 286% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97674418605 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73602916003 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.274692846 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.181818182 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274803266719 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149218848595 0.0925447433944 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.303939683057 0.071462118173 425% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271447173828 0.151781067708 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.376755764713 0.0609392437508 618% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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