One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people using the computer as the best invention of the last 100 years. There is a widespread worry that this would only lead to a myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that computer is making everything possible in this 21st century. In fact, not only can computer reduce the gaps between different countries, but it can also help students to broaden their horizons in a different field. Similarly, we can find overwhelming evidence to support the fact that the-state-of-the-art technology is being widely used all around the world. Needless to say, all these merits stand people in good stead as far as getting familiar with modern technology like a computer is concerned.
Moreover, another pivotal aspect of this argument is that the influence of computer is gaining more and more success in every field such as education, work and even health sectors. In other words, if there is no computer, there will be no advancement in technology. For example, there is a good deal of research by various governmental bodies that shows computer is helping in declining the higher number of errors which I personally believe that is making changes in everyones' life. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of the ubiquity of the internet.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the merits of the computer as the best invention are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, for example, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86071428571 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82065767045 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5591834904 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.416666667 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095051378042 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351861664951 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646811481464 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688616431083 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555907879933 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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