One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people following stringent rules and regulations. There is a widespread worry that this would only lead to a myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and so should be rejected.
There is a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that by following different rules and laws, people will be more organised and disciplined. Not only can these strict rules make people more aware about the consequences of breaking laws such as life imprisonment, different monetary penalties and fines etc.,but it can also let people follow the rules effectively. Needless to say, all these merits stand people in good stead as far as obeying law is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that parents and teachers, who have their own principles in life, are more successful in bringing up their children in greater ways. Besides, children who follow guidelines from their seniors tend to be more successful in life. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of following different laws of a nation.
In view of the arguments outlined above one can conclude that law can definitely change human behaviour in a positive way and the benefits of this are indeed to great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...ferent monetary penalties and fines etc.,but it can also let people follow the rules...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...w can definitely change human behaviour in a positive way and the benefits of this are indeed to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92888888889 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77650103992 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568888888889 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3926729555 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.818181818 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18796934216 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616771424534 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784853808439 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116088011767 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958940406406 0.0609392437508 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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