These days, there is an ongoing debate among people about the most important invention for the past 100 years. While it is possible to believe that antibiotics play an important role in saving lives and airplanes serves hundreds to thousands of people every day to travel longer distances in a shorter amount of time, my point of view is that computers, however, is more important than any other invention exists. In this essay, I shall explain a few angles of the argument.
There are several reasons why computers play a foundation for all of the inventions. It can also be argued that computers play a major part in designing airplanes, improving its radar systems, researching and inventing antibiotics. It should also be taken into account that computers laid a solid foundation in the invention of airplanes and antibiotics. For an example, testing drugs and improving the air traffic control system has never been easier without the use of a computer.
There are some people claims that the most important invention for the past 100 years as the airplane. Firstly, it should be noted that airplanes would not exist without computers. Then, there are concerns about the accuracy of computer calculations.
While there are strong arguments to support all three inventions, in my personal opinion I strongly believe the most important invention of all time as the computer.
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Suggestion: all the
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11013215859 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73036079542 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2947756961 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.454545455 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320719449581 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121729030649 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126904821184 0.071462118173 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184440175799 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755767962637 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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