What is your view on the idea that it takes failure to achieve success?
Nowadays, the achievement of success is connected with the mistakes learned in the past. However, persistence is also important for the great climb to success. This essay will discuss why failure is not the secret to success.
To begin, failure is the most important reason to succeed at any task and has led many people to the top of the world. Any person has fallen before succeeding since it is impossible to be right at the first moment. For example, scientists who try millions of times to create the cure for diseases until succeeding. Certainly, the number of attempts has led to perfection and success.
On the other hand, persistence is the key point which keeps people focused on their targets and dreams, also responsible for the determination to follow the objectives. It is impossible to keep on tracks without persistence. For instance, university students who attempt four years long in classes to achieve their goals. Obviously, they have been influenced by persistence.
This essay discussed why failure is responsible for the achievement of success. However, persistence is the true support to be a successful person. In my opinion, failure is not the main factor of success.
This essay discussed why failure is responsible for the achievement of success. However, persistence is the true support to be a successful person. In my opinion, failure is not the main factor of success.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90876879272 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493506493506 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.019395161 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1764705882 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5882352941 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211382183368 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857520287533 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750048438686 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154697684948 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962818266462 0.0609392437508 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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