Any new technological development in the recent years is a boon or curse for the society in general
technology has recently been raising many concerns among communities. While some people believe technologic advancements are a good influence on the life of people, others believe they are responsible for human degradation. This essay will discuss way new developments are essential for society.
On the one hand, people who are supported by technological advancements have better lives. These advancements have profoundly affected the creation of new medical apparatus, which have contributed significantly for people wellbeing. For example, a new x-ray machine which can carefully control cancer diseases. The use of technology is beneficial for individuals who opt for it and carefully control any treat against their health.
On the other hand, new technologies are known to be a bad influence on the life of people life. Indeed, technology has increased the number of admissions in mental issues in hospitals dramatically. For instance, the number of patients has changed dramatically after the use of social media. individuals are adversely affected by the use of technology.
This essay discussed why new technologies are actively involved in the life of people in a good manner. many technologies can help wellbeing; however, they can destroy the lives of people life. it is believed that new advancements are responsible for humans' degradation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18632636041 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9580705865 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1428571429 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242623912694 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882401189774 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472898195608 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154892310049 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381400975366 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 53.1260098522 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.