While prisons should punish criminals, others believe that the primary function of the prison is to help them how to have better lives. What do you think is the main purpose of the time spent in prison: punishment or rehabilitation?
In this modern era there is an ongpoing deliberation among people on punishment and rehabilitation of prisoners. While some people argue that prisoners should be punished on the crimes, on my point of view prisoners must rehabilitate inside the prisons. In this essay, I shall discuss factors in strengthening my point of view while analyzing both the advantages and disadvantages of rehabilitation.
First and foremost, the society can experience myriad of benefits through rehabilitation such as increasing quality of life of the society by ensuring social security as well. As an example if a prisoner is rehabilitated inside the prison he will learn lot of things about their life and they can get vocational training during that time period which will definitely help that person to survive in the future. In addition, rehabilitation will help them to get into the society without hesitation.
On the other hand, some people think that prisoners shoud be punished inside the jail. For instance, if prisoners are punished on their offence that will tend them to hate the society than their early life. Moreover, once they are released to the society they will continue their early life because they do not have a proper way to earn their bread. However, countries who believe in punishment have not experienced decrease in crime rate compared with the countries who believe in rehabilitation.
In conclusion, it is recommended to introduce more and more vocational training courses for the prisoners such as carpentary, motor mechanism, bakery and etc. It is also believed that government should ensure fair distribution of resources to majority of the population to mitigate the depression of the people which is the main cause for crimes. Finally, governments should also improve the facilitities inside the prison to minimize the frustration of the prisoners.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29530201342 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02263133158 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2342381573 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.384615385 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30560136332 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107710468814 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737703266316 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170435666802 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349407745833 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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