Write about climate Change? who is responsible Whether government or Industries? Why?

Last decade has witnessed mammoth increased in the global temperature, which leads to detrimental effects of climate change. Proponents are arguing on solutions to eradicate this menace along with responsible agency for controlling the situation from worsening further. Many are blaming governments for their slow and not so significant steps, others, have opposite views stating that industries are responsible for the mess of atmosphere for neglecting laws over profitability. In this article, I will discuss the role and responsibility of the federal government for fighting against environmental problems.

To begin with, there are a variety of dramatic steps needs to be taken by a law enforcement agency. First, they need to form stricter norms with a hefty penalty on the industries which are breaking the green laws. Furthermore, legislators can impose green taxes on companies emitting toxic gases. For instance, recent such law implemented in the USA as ripe rich benefits and measured lower pollution levels. Moreover, they should promote more tree plantation and restrict massive deforestation.

On the other hand, Industries should support the government by following laws, they should also increase research and development in the area of the sustainable and alternate source of energy like wind and solar power. For example, a recent incentive given to Indian households has increased the enormous use of solar panels.

In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that all parties are equally responsible against the fight of global climate change including the government, industries, and society.

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Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61943319838 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99309416218 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68016194332 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3949290147 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14363760886 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437002965989 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438416057155 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835215559848 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048443992993 0.0609392437508 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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