You are given climate change as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study?

Climate is a very wide and interesting field, although, there are diverse fields of streams, I would prefer to pick the most important field for the civilization that is global climate change. Recently, we have witnessed massive urbanization and industrialization, which has led to mammoth deforestation. These phenomena are risky for the society and animal ecosystem.

Climate change has left the profound impacts on the humans and if does not deal seriously, it will jeopardize living of the future generation. This area is of fundamentally important for rising air pollution by the humans mainly due to rapid industrialization and enormous emission of toxic gases by transportations. If we continue in this trajectory, there will be a fight for survival. For Instance, we have already received data about the global population in major cities of the world and the rising sea level.

Moreover, by studying root causes and severe impact of climate change, we can warn people, industries and the government and spread awareness message to eradicate this menace. For instance, we can run massive campaigns like planting more trees and using the public transport system for reducing the emission of Carbon Dioxide by fossil fuels. Furthermore, with the collaboration between the industries and the government, we can innovate and invent renewable and green energy sources.

In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that climate change is of a paramount important field of study for the betterment of mankind, hence, I would prefer to study the same, so that I can spread awareness and educate people towards a reduction of its detrimental impacts.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31818181818 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07627999743 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6815189064 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.636363636 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184121444239 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639410498763 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486494529304 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113064701086 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420516387474 0.0609392437508 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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