In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss your opinions and give examples.

Recently, we have witnessed increased tourism economy in the less developed countries, mainly due to increased air travel connectivities and its cost-effectiveness. Proponents are debating over these phenomena, many argue that it has enormous advantages, however, others have opposite view stating that it comes with many downsides and disadvantages. In this article, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages along with the appropriate conclusion.

To begin with, there are numerous benefits of tourism industries in the less developed countries, first, it brings employment opportunities for locals. For instance, due to mammoth growth in tourism many international hotels open their hotels in such countries, hence, this lead creating more jobs for domestic people. Moreover, travel and infrastructure also get a boost.

On the other hand, there are negligible downsides for this development. Due to increasing inbound tourist from the world over, natural habitats are getting polluted, which is not a good sign for global climate change. For instance, this, in turn, lead to increased deforestation, beaches are getting filled with dirt hampering marine ecosystem.

In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that increased tourism, if developed holistically can be boon for developing countries, otherwise, it can be ban with detrimental impacts.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81280788177 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24203056928 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665024630542 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1869890352 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145522079143 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530830639221 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643535962219 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993764002418 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787581152702 0.0609392437508 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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