You are given climate as the field of study. Which area will you prefer? Explain why you picked up the particular area for your study?
Climate has a very range area of study and is, also, very interesting filed to make researches. It is possible to foresee the days when it is going to ray and the cold areas within a determined time. If I am given one filed of study, I would definitely choose to study the weather forecasting.
First of all, it is extremelly important to determine the rainy days and the locations where these events will happen. For example, farmers need to be aware of that to grow crops for human usage, otherwise it is a wasted time and money, and surely, people will not have products for consumption.
Moreover, it is crucial to study the probability of having flood in some locations of big cities. Where I live, there are risk areas that when it rains, it is likely to occur flood. Scientists, in my country, try to prevent such unpleasant situation, however it is somewhat dificult due to the lack of high quality technology.
Furthermore, studying the weather may be possible to create a time travel machine. The physician Lorentz in the 70's, while still a student in MIT, tried to devise a model of the weather but found out the chaos. He realized that if it is possible to solve, analitically, the Navier-Stokes equations, then it is possible to develop the machine.
Finally, studying the weather is the best choice that I can probably make to contribute to society and reach my dream.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68442622951 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71862831875 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5061575655 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.25 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134331911141 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447986512011 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371364639436 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651696103405 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496199156944 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.