Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages.
Migration from rural to urban areas has been on a rise since past few decades. People move for better education or more employment opportunities. This essay will discuss the reasons for this migration and prove how this migration has more advantages than disadvantages.
The main reason for movement from the villages to the cities is to raise the standard of life. In the rural areas, infrastructure, hospitals and quality educational institutes are limited which negatively affects the quality of life. Other reasons include moving away from the stressful environment created by the relatives. For example, a relative may regularly interfere in their personal life and disturb their peace of mind which hinders their progress in life. Therefore, for all these reasons young prefer to move to the cities.
A young person should be satisfied when he finally decides as it will prove to be beneficial for his family. Living a good quality of life changes the way a person thinks and he is motivated to progress as he is at peace mentally. For instance, it brought a significant positive change in my uncle's family when he decided to leave his village and settle in a city as his children got a chance to focus on studies whereas he concentrated on his business.
In conclusion, people shift from rural areas for various reasons such as better quality of life and it is beneficial for them ultimately. In my opinion, moving to cities can be a game changer.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9512195122 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7891037525 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.752210227 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6923076923 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202515925028 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734747183755 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044052113444 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128244184039 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475048818236 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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