In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is strictness in parts of the world about Children behaviour while in some countries they give them
freedom to do anything of their choice. In my opinion, children need to be taught the social ethics politely
rather than forcing them to behave in certain ways.
Peolple in developing countries face the issue such as lack of moral values, hence parents believe that they need
to teach childen about morality by developing strict rules for them. Strict parents argue that rules need
to be set for children in order to learn the etiquettes of living a life. It is true that children can be
moulded in any way parents want them to, depending how effective are their methods.
Having strict rules about ethics at a young age develops sense of responsibilty toward others, which becomes
part of their personality and contributes in becoming a responsible citizen. The other benefit is that rules
brings discipline in children life, which is a prerequisite to excel in any career, they want to pursue.
Following set of rules set by elders hinders the ability of children to grow mentally. Although it makes them
obedient but at the same time it affects their ability of reasoning. Critical thinking is the basic
requirement of mental growth which defines the success of any person.
To conclude, it is necessary for children to learn ethics but is not advisable at the cost of critical thinking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, while, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00421940928 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5782696883 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1383887751 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307031861067 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112190268662 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850927386415 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965363672549 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759669437042 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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