Do you agree or disagree ? Young people enjoy life more than older people
The world is changing day by day and it effects the generations in some way. But what are the consequences of these effects on people? If we look deep into our grands life and compare it with ours, reaching the solutions may not be so hard. In my opinion, the youngs have much more fun and enjoy life than older people do. To me, what makes their lifes different than olds is that the technological developments and the changes about traditions. I shall explain details for my stance in the following paragraphs.
I 'm sure we all are told by our grands that in past people have a challenging li...
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Do you think this essay s content is right?I wrote it with this way but in the example from ETS,it gives an explanations about olds like our parents
Sentence: All in all, with the improvements, the world become easier to live and more enjoyable to evaluate.
Description: The fragment world become easier is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace become with verb, past tense
Sentence: We have all opportunities and we don't have to get recover from the ilness like our grands couldn't find a medicine in past or have to sit without computer, cell phones or tvs.
Error: ilness Suggestion: illness
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