Some people pursue career paths that lead to management positions. Other people follow career paths leading to positions of individual responsibility, which do not involve managing others. Which career path are you more likely to follow? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Career path that an individual has to take plays a vital role in deciding the life of an individual. I'm likely to follow a career path that will lead to management positions rather than to positions of individual responsibility, for a variety of reasons. Management has been my favorite topic since my school days. My ultimate aim in life is to become a manager of a profitable concern. Hence, I will like to be in a management position for the variety of benefits it offers and the kind of high prestige that it confers on me.
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Sentence: First of all, whatever technical path anyone take, he or she is prone to become a manager.
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Sentence: Hence I will be at my best, when I position myself in a management position.
Description: The word position is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
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