As languages such as English Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken there is a fear that many minority languages may die out Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages What is your view of this practice

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As languages such as English, Spanish, and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages
What is your view of this practice?

As the world becomes more integrated, language is considered as an indispensable means of communication. There is much-discussed controversy about how to preserve less influential languages due to the increasing use of some languages like English, Spanish, and Mandarin. In my opinion, while there is little to total to effectively prevent the extinction of some small languages, it is still crucial for individuals and governments to protect their own dialect.
On the one hand, globalization in this day and ae has led to inevitable consequences including the disappearance of some languages. In other words, as the goal of people is to understand each other, knowing and using common speech is essential to interpret most of the context. Therefore, in many international corporations, employers usually tend to recruit individuals using at least one more language besides their mother tongue. According to some surveys, employees in non-English speaking countries who can use English fluently got 20% higher employment rates compared to others. However, this could not be an incident for not taking care of one's native speech.
By preserving the language, people can also remain their culture, tradition, and history. Indeed, a nation that letting its own dialect die out may struggle with poor culture, less diversity, which eventually results in assimilation. Fortunately, many countries have taken some solutions to tackle this problem. Domestically, parents can pass down their language to their children through daily interaction. Moreover, authorities can provide exhortative scholarship for students if they are fully master their mother tongue. The grants can be either a free entrance to university or study aboard.
In conclusion, although some small dialects may disappear, I reconfirm that it is an individual's and government's responsibility to take initiative to minimize the outcomes as much as possible.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, at least, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59246575342 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21463355995 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667808219178 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6798827989 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.866666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227470202338 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700607547403 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700858532849 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126647588497 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689818230519 0.056905535591 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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