Dear editor,
My name is Jim and I am a frequent reader of your newspaper. Recently, I encounted the notice regarding persons who have ultruisticly benefited the community. Herein, I would like to purpose Mr.Wright.
Mr.Wright is a repairman in my naborhood who has worked for fourty years in the community and he is going to retire next year. During the period, he fixed staircases,benches and other facilities. Surroundings are maintained so timely that residents in our neiborhood never fell any disconfort in their daily life. Neighbors all grateful about Mr.Wright.
Due to the reason that Mr.Wright decided to retire next year, I deem that this is a perfect chance to reward Mr.Wright to express our gratitude. I suggest your newspaper nominates him as great repairman of the year and we will contribute a sum of money as bonus to him as award.
Hope to hear you soon.
Kind Regards
Jim form Windsor
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reference to the recent advertisement in your newspaper regarding award for community related service. I want to make you aware about teacher, Mr. Sanjay Sharma who I believe is worthy enough to receive this prestigious award.
Using his spare time in the evenings, he has shown tremendous results to clean city’s beaches and ponds from all sorts of garbage. He has completely changed the landscape in southern part of the city. Not only he has removed solid waste from the southern stretch but also has ensured 24 hours surveillance across the beach with help of police department. In addition, this effort would help aquatic animals and preserve the overall environment in the city.
As a token of thanks and further to encourage his good work, Cash reward and a free advertisement campaign to find him volunteers to speed up the cleanliness drive across the district would be best award which can be given to him. It shall motivate him further to continue achieving more.
Thank you for kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
MK
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99139409552 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692810457516 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7707240592 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3636363636 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12187698106 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037343143617 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502131353987 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550274796513 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618415578712 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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