Urban sprawl has been a myriad of concern in every places in the world. People think it is a good idea to tackle this problem by developing the city vertically than horizontally. This essay will discuss why develop the city vertically is in fact not a good idea.
Many metropolitan cities increased their building levels instead of spreading the population out to a wider location due to the fact that people think it is more convenient to focus the development in closer range. Clearly, squeezing thousands of people in one location causes overcrowding, which also causes the certain area to be more expensive than others. For example, food and housing in the city area are much more expensive than in the urban area. A city with overcrowded population is one of the main problem of urban sprawl.
Additionally, construct a city vertically can cause uneven development on other areas that are not involved. For example, products and services in a city with more population in it are better than urban area that is under develop. Therefore, by spreading the population horizontally, it help with the development of other area as well.
This essay discussed how construct cities vertically causes overcrowding and uneven development. In my opinion, urban sprawl by constructing the city vertically instead of horizontally is not a good idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...reading the population horizontally, it help with the development of other area as w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, well, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10859728507 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95007356016 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 139.433497537 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497737556561 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3787941893 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0833333333 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259690306601 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116623007276 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491278466395 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178557306876 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449419403624 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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