Large city and small town
On logic ground, there is no compelling reason to argue about the benefits and drawback of living in big city. Some supporters may see that this life is convenience and entertainment, while some critics are likely to see that city people faces chaotic life and stressful. In my opinion, I believe that this large city living can be compared to a double-edged sword, that presents both pros and cons.
In term of the significant pros, this downtown people lives among lots of facilities and receive quality public utility such as cleaned tap water, systematic transportation (subway, taxi, plane and so on) and plenty of food and materials that they have many ways to purchase. Besides, service centers and amusements usually located in big town. Central Plaza, for example, is the enormous department store having various shopping zones (clothe, cosmetic, utensil, and food) and entertainment activities for city people after their working time.
On the other hand, this urban living might undergo with high-living cost because of a rise living demand and imported food. Moreover, these people will live in narrow space and experience with crowded people in every single day. On top of that, city people would have respiratory disease more than people who lives in small town result from pollution emitted from vehicle and factory as well.
In conclusion, although living in large city poses convenience life, its disadvantages also affect people about health and expenditure. So I would like to suggest that people choose suitable city for their life-style and have adaptability wherever they live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24124513619 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63977314306 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661478599222 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.130636921 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185137878832 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069012944722 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656633669234 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10681621852 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258766019062 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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