You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
» Explain the reason why you decline the offer
» Express your gratitude
» Explain why you like your current job very much.
Dear Sir,
My name is Truong Nguyen. I have received your email with the offer for a computer engineer spot in AAA company in Da Nang. I am glad to be invited to work in that position. However, I will have to decline this offer for some personal reasons.
Firstly, I do not think it is the right time for me to leave my current office in Ho Chi Minh City because I have worked here for over 5 years and reached a stable salary. In my current company, there are trusty colleagues to work with. Therefore, it is better for me if I stay with my group. In addition, I cannot leave my family to go move to Da Nang for work, it will be hassle for me to go back and forth every weekends to meet my wife and sons.
I am very proud that my works have been featured by the AAA company’s managers and thus, offered me a position. Although I cannot join your workforce, I still want to collaborate with your departments to develop some future softwares.
I am very sorry for the decline at the moment. However, please consider my returning offer.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Truong N.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38095238095 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46510338401 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5171372643 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7142857143 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140823559414 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547299147109 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408129397036 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938237698323 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348302969678 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.