To what extent is the use of animals in scientific research acceptable?
It’s common knowledge that nowadays a vast majority of different organizations conduct scientific researches which require experiments on animals in order to achieve higher results in production quality and to make new discoveries in medicine. Nonetheless, I strongly believe that use of animals in scientific purposes is unreasonable and unacceptable and should be prohibited on the legislative level.
First and foremost, experiments on animals are inhumane acts which could cripple animals and inflict irreparable harm and damage to their health. Moreover, animals are natural creations which are able to feel pain and perceive information like human beings, therefore experiments on animals should be equated to these on humans in psychological aspect.
Secondly, some scientific researches can require a lot of species of animals during the continuing period of time which make these animals on the verge of the extinction. As a result, involvement of animals in scientific tests can lead to emergence of endangered species of animals and destruction of natural food chain.
Finally, animals’ physical structure and reaction to outer irritants are different from these of human beings therefore experiments on such popular species as rats and rabbits can be unreasonable and cause significant errors in testing. As s result, these tests don’t provide credible information detrimentally affected people’s wellness and cause serious mental problems.
In conclusion, I can state that the use of animals in scientific pursuits couldn’t be justified and accepted because it is infraction of animal’s rights which cause irretrievable damage both to animals and human beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...pecies of animals during the continuing period of time which make these animals on the verge o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84462151394 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22345474076 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557768924303 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6296127486 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.0 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274792762821 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128617547647 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783100670776 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170754168633 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877174848398 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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