Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
These days, students who follow higher education after school have a chance to choose what they desire to study, however, there are some arguments said that the subjects these students select need to be useful for their future life like science and technology. From my perspective, both views are reasonable in such different circumstances and I strongly agree with the previous one.
As the world become more advanced, people have a tendency to be more open-minded and self-reliant. Therefore, most university students are approved to pursue their dream majors. The significantly advantageous of this development lead to a higher volume of energetic and well-educated workforce in the future due to the satisfaction of workers on their current jobs. The satisfaction of doing what they are into are prone to aid them to be more creative, thereby, the employers will receive higher level of job performances from their employees. In addition, the amount of students who giving up their fields at college will be incredibly rare as these are their perennial ambitions they have chased for ages. For example, educator who has a crack for arts and designs has always dreamed about being an admirable artists and devoted most of their time on creating numerous spectacular art works, therefore it seems unreasonable for them to continue their desirable major.
On the other angles, students, however, are well-advised on chasing the top jobs by choosing the practical and skillful subjects which are relevant to computer science or doctorship. These college education often provides students with high qualifications which they not only can enlarge their knowledge but also master their soft skills. As the result, that is what enterprises and high-end companies expect on their employer. Moreover, with the useful exposers they have accumulated during the course, can be applied in their life to gain well-paid jobs and have much better career prospects. In consequence, the living standard in the vicinity will be more innovative and developed.
In conclusion, I am indisputable with the fact that learners should select the major which help them to cope with life in the future, however choosing the suitable major for them is more beneficial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this college' or 'These colleges'?
Suggestion: This college; These colleges
...vant to computer science or doctorship. These college education often provides students with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27932960894 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84141239856 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583798882682 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9046822076 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214942239162 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732077322884 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541062170354 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133809528031 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676119370948 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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