"“In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples
In this day and age, this expression that people are killing in the war of ideas has become a controversial debate among the public around the world. A single idea from an ordinary man does not withstand among a group,s ideology. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this sentence as a right opinion. At first, among different ideas, an individual thought might be very constructive. But, what will happen to this vision inside an opposition? They never agree with a single thought. For example, when I was a University student, In our research group I had a good idea to experiment objects which it dismissed from group members that did not want to accept its advantages.
In addition, it is better for a person to leave the group. It is important for an idea to express in a group agrees. However, among the people who act against you, your idea will be killed. For instance, a recent research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of unique thoughts are fading and killing by strong opposing groups.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this viewpoint, I profoundly believe that an individual with an idea even great, could not advance his opinion among a group with opposing ideology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86462882096 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69968608402 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8721185628 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6923076923 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137278046132 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538033563088 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384972439959 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868627183584 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139074365612 0.0609392437508 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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