You recently met a manager of a new company started in your city. After the meeting, the manager wrote you a letter offering a job at this company. However, you cannot accept the job offer.
Write him back and say:
• How you feel about the job.
• Why can't you accept it
• Provide a reference to your friend who might be interested.
Dear Sir,
My name is Truong Nguyen. I had an interview at your office 2 weeks ago for a job vacancy in computer engineering. Recently, I have received your email offering a position in your company which I am very grateful. However, there is one personal issue which keep me from getting the job for now. Therefore, I am writing this letter in order to inform you that I cannot take your offer to work for your company.
Allow me to give you a brief information for this inconvenience. At the moment, my family is making a decision whether we should move from Ho Chi Minh City to Da Nang to take care of our parents. That is the reason why I am sorry to decline your offer although I would love to work as a computer engineer for your company. However, I can nominate one person who was my partner in my previous projects. I can assure this person is very reliable and also looking for a job. If you want a meeting, I will be glad to give you his information.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Truong N
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35567010309 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54201071431 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623711340206 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0836554455 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290659960556 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10008911433 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672368400953 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200413873635 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485113361921 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.