Some people think that young children need to attend nursery before primary school. While others believe young children can spend all day at home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions differ as to whether children under the age of 6 should be sent to preschools or stay at home. I believe children should definitely go to nursery centers.
It is understandable why people say that kids should stay at home until primary schooling. One reason is that parents, especially stay-at-home mothers, can have more time interacting with their children. This should greatly help strengthen the connection between kids and adults in the family. Another reason is that children feel more familiar and comfortable when staying at home rather than going to nursery centers. Although there are more toys and friends to play with, children still cannot find the exact feelings of being at home. Additionally, with their current level of adaptability, they could be easily overwhelmed and panicked when being sent to the nursery at this stage of age because the school environment is completely strange and different.
However, I side with those who think that kids have to attend nursery class before formal education. One reason to support my standpoint on this matter is that the young will receive essential early education to prepare for their next level of education. At preschools, kids will be given lessons to approach some basic and academic skills such as reading the alphabets and counting from 1 to 10 which are fundamental for their cognitive development. Furthermore, nursery schools offer a great environment for social skills improvement. With a little help from trained professionals, kids will learn the first steps of socializing and start to expand their connection to other peers.
To conclude, I think that young children should spend several years staying at nursery centers to develop elementary skills before coming to primary school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether children under the age of 6 should be s...
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Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skills'' or 'skill's'?
Suggestion: skills'; skill's
...ls offer a great environment for social skills improvement. With a little help from tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, as to, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28268551237 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78033273131 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1821013564 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26978660713 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994169416323 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716630266025 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190976522947 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690254776284 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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