Many people think regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is affect of native regions in well-accomplished person's life. There is a widespread worry that this would only lead to a myriad of concerns in society. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is, a person in his native region have more network in many aspects such as friends, political reach. Having a good network in the society surrounded by you is very important to achieve success in life. Thus, a person having an effective network in his native region not only helps in solving his daily problems but also become a success in his life. Needless to say, all these benefits stand something in good stead when doing something is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that some people think, if you have a strong determination and willpower, you can achieve anything in your life. Besides, they also believe native regions really does not matter for a person to become a success in life. Hence, it is apparent that why some people are against to this opinion.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of being in the native region is of paramount importance and indeed too great to consider.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... of native regions in well-accomplished persons life. There is a widespread worry that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, really, so, thus, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86725663717 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73149015237 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561946902655 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6049587231 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314709099365 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103774856392 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100076981817 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179583196781 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466852836009 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.