Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose solutions you think would be effective
In most countries, there is an increase in crime among people, particularly youth. This essay will identify reasonable causes from this issue and estimates some potential solutions for this issue.
Regarding the causes, perhaps, the main cause of this is situation is lack of attention in family. People, especially youth, who are neglected by their families and do not get adequate love and attention that they desire might be encouraged to commit a crime, such as violence. Another cause is that lack formal education. Example can be seen in some people who do not acquire a formal education, particularly in reading skill, would probable do not know about norms of law and even break the law, such as traffic regulations. A third factor is difficulty in finding an occupation. This situation would trigger young people involved in illegal activities, such as stealing, to earn money to continue their life.
Turning to possible solutions, an obvious step would be volunteering program to support young people, which can be seen in mentoring children who need positive support from adults. The mentor of this program ranges from adult around kids' home, such as neighbors, to senior and teacher at the school. If we took this step, it would reduce crime among young people. A second remedy might urge the implementation of anti-violence courses that help children learn ways to manage anger without using fists or weapons. The last way to prevent crime is that government should support fund, staff, and other resources that help schools in developing an effective set of crime prevention strategies.
In summary, It is logical to conclude that not only are there some reasons why crime appears to be rising, but there has some solutions to prevent this situation as well. While lack of attention in family, lack of formal education, and difficulty in finding a job seem to be the main causes, there are volunteering program, implementation of anti-violence courses, and support from government to crime prevention strategies that can be solution for this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, second, so, third, well, while, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16320474777 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77093507079 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0787709689 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308199572247 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100686841064 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689294791289 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191725323331 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279891280597 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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