Some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additional funding, but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
There is no doubt that schools play a preponderant role in everyone's life because it builds the base of any human's life. In these modern days, it has become common to put the holdings and advertisement signs in schools in order to attract students. Therefore, it is widely debated among intellectuals that these institutions should be allowed to put these signs or not. Enormous advantages can be yield if graffiti will be followed in the schools.
The main preponderant point to support my view is that it will increase the funding of a school. As the sponsoring company will pay a hefty sum of money for the advertisement to the school to attract students; thus, the ratio of the customer will increase which significantly boost the market share of a company. KFC can be taken as an epitome when KFC Company will advertise its product on the wall of schools, it will increase the customer of this company because funds will be provided to the school by the KFC.
Moreover, an academic institution not only will get fringe benefits but also will build strong relations with the companies. These will enhance the overall performance of a school. Furthermore, schools will be earning plenty of money from these companies to recommend their names through advertisement. Therefore, it can be said that the academic institutions can generate a huge amount of funds if advertisements will be put on walls.
Although there are several disadvantages will be confronted by the school, advantages of putting advertisement are more than the disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... life because it builds the base of any humans life. In these modern days, it has beco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 6.10837438424 295% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06225680934 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99025655107 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560311284047 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0648735437 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.416666667 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0919911716485 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447112345723 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340085249839 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661945590871 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182034622175 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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