nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don't really need them. Why it is happening in your opinion it is a positive or negative trend for an individual and seociety.
Modern era has witnessed the drastic enhancement in the adoption of adequate materialistic things. The primary reasons behind all this scenario are towering desires,aristocratic lifestyles and lucrative advertisements. this essay will intend the both positive and negative impacts of holding abundant possessions on an individual and society.
To begin with, there are plethora points that are responsible for he growing materialistic culture. First and foremost, adequate rise in financial economy across the globe have also arose the financial ground of masses. Helping them to spend much more on their desired amenities. Secondly, the attractive show-off culture is rising at an alarming rate. Also, the numerous marketing strategies tempt people's mind to purchase their alluring products through magnificent advertisements,exciting offers such as buy one get one free and so on.
There are numerous benefits of this trend on both an individual and society. Firstly, it uplifts the standard of living of masses. They are equipped with all the modern comforts of life. Secondly, it also boost the economy of various business sectors such as real-estate,vehicle,clothing,electrical gadgets and so on.Playing a vital role in the bounce of national economy. It also develop the sense of hard-work and competition to achieve their target thus encourages them to perform efficiently to turn their dreams into reality.
However, there are some adverse effects of consumerism. First of all, they are becoming self-oriented. As they are too busy to earn their bread and butter sense of social charity is disappearing gradually. Secondly, consumerism make people more extravagant. Despite of their actual earning people take heavy loans which are almost impossible to pay thus drowning them towards the elusive situation of bankrupt. Moreover, in the rat-race of holding expensive and magnificent assets, many people get indulge in the trap of serious crimes which is a great threat to society.
To recapitulate, shopping has become part and parcel of life. Undeniably, despite of few merits of consumerism its demerits outweigh the pros.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , aristocratic
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Suggestion: This
...ifestyles and lucrative advertisements. this essay will intend the both positive and...
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Message: Did you mean 'for the growing'?
Suggestion: for the growing
...re plethora points that are responsible for he growing materialistic culture. First and foremo...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'grows'.
Suggestion: grows
...hora points that are responsible for he growing materialistic culture. First and foremo...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'arisen'.
Suggestion: arisen
...cial economy across the globe have also arose the financial ground of masses. Helping...
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Suggestion: , exciting
...ducts through magnificent advertisements,exciting offers such as buy one get one free and...
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Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...ern comforts of life. Secondly, it also boost the economy of various business sectors...
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Suggestion: , vehicle
...ous business sectors such as real-estate,vehicle,clothing,electrical gadgets and so on.P...
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...ors such as real-estate,vehicle,clothing,electrical gadgets and so on.Playing a vital role ...
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Message: Did you mean 'develops'?
Suggestion: develops
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61728395062 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60619587399 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62037037037 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6140414938 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120021006106 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312515781521 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354721433955 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560756424073 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283003541478 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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