Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The growing population, advancement in technology and improvement in human lifestyle has risen global energy demand which resulted in major environmental problems all over the world. As environmental degradation is a global issue. Therefore, some people believe that it should be tackled globally, while other people argue that nations who are the most responsible for ecosystem impairment should resolve it nationally by developing apropos criteria to implement protection rules and regulations.
In my view, the environmental problems should be addressed globally as well as nationally because of the environmental issue such as; ozone layer depletion, acid rain, global warming and existing resources elimination are affecting our ecosystem throughout the world. As a consequence, the environmental pollutions are produced by the native country affects neighbouring countries inhabitants as well as other creatures. However, the developed countries of the world have introduced a clean development mechanism to abate harmful impacts of environmental pollutions to their aboriginal to neighbours. For example, introducing the energy efficiency measures in different energy sectors decrease energy consumption drastically thereby produce fruitful results to the surrounding. Additionally, the use of renewable energy sources such as solar, wind and biomass not only dwindles the environmental problems but also reduces costlier production of electricity.
In case of the national scale solution of environmental problems, the nation can decrease its environmental problems by introducing public awareness through all ranges of the population from children to older people. Such as the problem of solid waste management and water pollutions could be entangled by practising the good waste management practices. This can be further understood on the basis of following examples i.e. in Pakistan, occupants are unaware of energy efficiency measures and the best waste management practices. Therefore, it looks like a place filled with plenty of rubbish whereas Taiwan, even a five years old kid is aware of not to through waste except waste disposal places, thereby you can not find any trash on roads, streets and public places. As a result, you find their cities are clean and environmental amiable to their citizens.
In conclusion, I suggest that addressing the environmental issues globally are significant its creature, while nationally addressed problem provides friendlier and cleanliness surrounding to its residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ironmental problems all over the world. As environmental degradation is a global i...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
... acid rain, global warming and existing resources elimination are affecting our ecosystem...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anliness surrounding to its residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89130434783 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20413968264 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1086857805 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.857142857 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201550059348 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689238707982 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514536681107 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128781454082 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579029962723 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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