The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

Essay topics:

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

The pie chart shows the proportion of different modes of transportation that people in Edmonton use and the table presents the reason of car use in the City.

According to the pie chart, car is the most used kind of transportation in Edmonton with almost half of the population driving it. LRT is also significantly used with 35% of the people using it - almost more than 3 times the number of those who use either the bus or cab.

On the table above, it shows that majority of car use is either for work or business. It is also frequently used to drive children to school. Lastly, it is infrequently used for shopping and doing leisure activities, with only 15% of the proportion each.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t majority of car use is either for work or business. It is also frequently used ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 568.0 965.302439024 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58064516129 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72352712489 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2717895003 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27828585834 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146601841063 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780154568188 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210659293827 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563869977341 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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