Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give opinions.
Public health care is always at the very forefront of the world preoccupation. One of the promising yet not fully understood approach is, by building up fitness facility in our community, health indicators can be increased through sports promotion. However, some people believe that installing sports facilities brings little value, substance or import.
Firstly, to quote the famous saying, “A healthy mind in a healthy body”, exercising is an excellent way to stay well-being. Hence, availability of the sports equipment can facilitate convenience of workout. It also supports people who can not afford to pay for gymnastics centres nor physical training courses.
However, there are many factors affect residents' health such as reducing environmental pollution, insurance policy, food hygiene, etc. For instance, people living in rural parts of my country do physical works day by day yet have a poor health condition. Lack of proper medical facilities, malnutrition and contaminated surroundings are leading to the untimely death of many by a minor ailment like diarrhoea.
In conclusion, although the sports is an essential task for human health, solely it is not enough for improvement. We now need a comprehensive policy for public health care which should be a practical issue instead of parody.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... well-being. Hence, availability of the sports equipment can facilitate convenience of...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t enough for improvement. We now need a comprehensive policy for public health c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56650246305 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03217076533 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71921182266 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5607054571 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.727272727 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201849665513 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688367235494 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400444400655 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109700171797 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537494348043 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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