Recently, the phenomenon of changing people behaviors by the laws and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that government rules are highly beneficial, such issue is regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined in this believe that legislation can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this topic as a true. At first sight, the laws finite our actions and obstruct the ways to prosperous. However, the rule could prevent the crimes because the offensive acts have legal punishments. For example, since legislation in countries such as the United States, the rate of crimes reduced in the western states.
In addition, often, many governmental rules ignored by criminals. But, a lawful community is not a place for criminals to stay in. The lawbreakers cannot do violence actions among a lawful population. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MTV University in 2014 has shown that the violence behaviors declined in a significant number of countries such as Sweden and Switzerland that their people agreed to live with rules, lawful society has made more safety for their families.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that despite all inconveniences with rules, the benefits of laws for the society are far outweighed their drawbacks that are vigorously destroyer.
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- The mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion? 77
- A common marketing strategy for big companies is to introduce various offers and discounts. However, these strategies may have impact on their reputation. What are some of the impacts? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences. 88
- The birth rate in most developed countries begins to fall and aging increase. What can be done now to deal with this situation? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35269709544 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98659505195 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622406639004 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9515172414 50.4703680194 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189885472484 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588745230234 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719275953029 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970832884228 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666428207686 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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