Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is an undeniable fact that future of the society depends on various factors and the most important one in decisions towards better future of the society. When young people asks himself/herself the question "Does he/she influences the important decisions towards the future of the society they live in?" the answer varies from person to person. Some person may think that the young population do not play any role in decisions towards society, however I disagree with the statement that "young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.". I feel this way for several reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
The first exquisit point to be mentioned is that now a days you can see many young people at Leadership positions in government as well as private organisations. The person who is playing a high level decision making role in the organisations should have capability to handle the important decisions of the organisation which will ultimately going to influence directly or indirectly the future of the society. My own experience is a great example for this. When I was employed as project officer under a prestigious health insurance scheme by government of my country. I was responsible for taking the crucial decisions in order to improve the utilization of the scheme at ground level. Being at that high level position, I was able to give my part in the welfare of society by taking important decisions and thus took part in activities which influences the future of the society.
Having discussed the importance of young generation in terms of leadership roles, let us now move on to another reason that young people in todays worls are very much passionate about the extracuricular activities conducted by colleges, universities such as projects related to healthy environment, hands for poors, children welfare projects, health related awareness programs etc. If you see the puplulation of volunteers in the country, you will find that myriad of young population are involved in the activities which are responsible for the better future of the society . This is also we can say a important decision that is being taken by the young generations towards the community.
A noteworthy interesting research conducted in my country India shows that more that the percentage of young people serving the society has been increased to from fourty to sixty five percent from last decade.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that young people today have so much influence on the important decisions regarding the future of society. This is because they are handling the leadership roles in the country as well as playing role in helping the society to have better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, thus, well, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2331.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14569536424 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88415832918 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485651214128 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 736.2 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.6244783369 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.6875 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3125 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374270831197 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11828863396 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996247948692 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197480219338 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109123557399 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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