The graph illustrates changes in the consumption of spreads namely margarine, low fat and reduced spreads and lastly butter in between 1981 to 2007.
In 1981, Butter was by far the most popular of these spreads, with about 142 grams usage. Margarine was eaten around 90 grams, while low fat and reduced spreads was not eaten yet.
However, during this 26 year period, the consumption of margarine and butter fell with the first one dramatically up to 50 grams and 40 grams respectively, making margarine one of the least popular spreads.
The consumption of low fat and reduced spreads, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking the butter in 2000. By 2007, it had soared to almost 70 grams.
Overall, The graph shows how the consumption of low fat and reduced spreads increased dramatically while the popularity of other spreads decreased over the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, lastly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00684931507 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62257224051 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6947648547 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158604863217 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815221461304 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616118102055 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103638660284 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622641177011 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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