You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
1- Explain the reason why you decline the offer
2- Express you gratitude
3- Explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be unable to join your company, as per the offer letter, from next month in Bangalore.
I understand that the offer is already signed off but due to recent turn of even, I would not be able to honor my part of the deal. As my wife is working in Bangalore, so I thought it is a great opportunity for me to reunite with my family. But she is getting transferred to Pune and I do not want to jeopardize this chance again.
It was one of the happiest days when I was informed about my selection for your company as I have heard so many good things about the organization. Unfortunately, it is not possible for me to join this time. I want to thank entire recruitment team and express my deepest apology to everyone, especially Mr. Mohan who took my interview.
As a part of negotiation, I have been offered the same exposure as I was supposed to get in your team. So, I am really excited about my new work here. I am extremely sorry that I could not join your firm.
I look forward to receiving your acknowledgement soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38679245283 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70674171176 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8652936148 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970063855144 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317661701015 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475691343598 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608813959308 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687439289804 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.